Written By Alex Proscia
Please note: Alex is a long time participant in one of my online writing workshops. Her writing is most often lyrical, always powerful. Complex. Intense. Complicated. This time she chose a very different style. To tell a very different story.
The prompt word was simply: Garbage Can.
It is a flash fiction of sorts, but literally written in a flash (ten minutes to be exact) that’s not even fiction. It’s memoir. Raw, stream of consciousness, courageous, real.
The checking, rechecking, tearing in two
The 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, steps to the kitchen sink and double back again
5 steps, was it, check again.
Walking out of the room, touch the doorknob once with your right hand
Twice,
Now seven times
Don’t let the “what if?” in.
Everything anthropomorphized
Everything with a personality
Can’t leave one grape behind, leave two: a team,
A ritual to leave the room, touch the rug once in the top right corner to say goodbye
Look in the mirror over your right, no left, no right shoulder and say
See you later
See you later
Check the outlet, check it again, take a picture of it
Check the oven, check each knob, run your hand over it
Make sure it’s cold
Check it again
Don’t let the “what if?” in.
For trash:
Keep it, keep it, absolutely keep it
But if you have to get rid of it, there are rules for that.
There are rules for everything,
There are rules about saying goodbye
For paper: rip in half only once
Two pieces,
No names (cross out, rip in half) NO NAMES
Check it, check it again
What if?
For tea bags, press the water out
Take 1, 2 sniffs of the wet flower smell
Say your name twice, imagine the picture from when you were twelve
Then into the can
But don’t look at where it lands.
For clothing, cut in half with scissors,
Or throw it down the garbage chute where you can’t reach it
Or
If you’re feeling particularly brave, give it away,
But don’t look at your hands while you do it.
Rip the trash bag slightly before it goes out
Two pieces, a partner,
Proper goodbyes only
Avert your eyes.
Alex Proscia is a 10th grade English teacher in Harlem, NY. She has been writing poetry since childhood, often inspired by conversations, connections, and her own anxieties. She lives in Queens with her fiancé Anthony and pets: Ziggy the corn snake, Zeek the betta, and Walt the hedgehog.
Dal
March 29, 2021 - 7:59 pm ·Amazing, gripping and touching.
Thank you for your honesty.
Liz
March 31, 2021 - 6:44 pm ·What a poignant piece. Simultaneously so personal and so relatable. Thank you for sharing this!
Nicole
April 1, 2021 - 12:22 am ·Beautiful and brave. Thank you for sharing this.
Angela Mancuso
April 1, 2021 - 12:45 am ·Thank you for this honest, emotional portrayal of living with mental illness. Would love to see more of your work!
Micayla
April 1, 2021 - 1:31 pm ·I got chills reading this. Extremely impactful.
Lori
April 2, 2021 - 1:34 pm ·wow. this is the most amazing skill in showing, vs. telling. I felt this in my body.
Alexa Weisman
April 2, 2021 - 3:01 pm ·Such a beautiful representation of your mind. Thank you for sharing!
Jessica
April 2, 2021 - 3:22 pm ·Very Vivid. The imagery allowed me to enter the mind of a person afflicted with OCD. Extremely well done!
Anne L Broyles
April 2, 2021 - 3:25 pm ·This piece really grabbed me, took me in, gave me a window on another person’s life.
JP
April 2, 2021 - 4:02 pm ·Beautifully written and hauntingly authentic—an incredible insight into often silent struggles!
William Wagner
April 2, 2021 - 4:58 pm ·After I cried, I read it again … then one more time! You are such an extraordinary writer/poet.
Thank you for this piece!
Emma Lou
April 2, 2021 - 8:24 pm ·Wow! What a powerful and poignant piece. Please share more!
Denise Shelton
April 3, 2021 - 3:17 am ·It very skillfully raised the anxiety level in the reader so that the writer’s anxiety became their own.
Dave Donelson
April 3, 2021 - 1:25 pm ·Beautifully presented piece that puts the reader into the writer’s mind. Very well done.
Tony Abbott
April 5, 2021 - 4:45 pm ·Lovely. It moves with such intent, always moving, with all the little thoughts of the obsessive mind.